Saturday, July 27, 2013

Today's act of editing

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"Time was they would be older and wait for me." The unicorn's horn fades slowly from view as it draws up the seeming of a horse around itself again. "Men, women: it would not matter. They would see my purity and it would be a sign their own could end. And now I hide on roads without names or desires lest I be hunted down and turned into aphrodisiacs."
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"Time was they would be older and wait for me." The unicorn's horn fades slowly from view as it draws up the seeming of a horse around itself again. "Men, women: it would not matter. They would see my purity and it would be a sign their own could end. And now I hide on roads without names or desires lest I be hunted down and used." 
via  a friend's comment on the line. The story in the series was written for a prompt, but I am tempted to make it canon in the series that most of the monsters are extinct or hiding because of being turned into aphrodisiacs and the like.

2 comments:

  1. *snort*

    aphrodisiacs...

    is that why unicorn power only works on virgins?

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    1. Yup :) I figure if we grind up elephant tusks, rhino horn (which isn't a horn anyway...) and kill sharks for their fins, people would do a LOT more for unicorn horn and the like. So the setting gets to have mythical creatures but they're all hiding or near-extinct.

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